Did you like my story? Was it well planned and did the ideas follow each other clearly?
person#1: yes, it was exciting and umm scary (its a horror story after all =) ) i think it was more like a chapter of a book than a draft judging from the amount of paragraphs... I think i got a headache from reading so much. (jk =D ) & you still haven't finished yet ... (wow) Anyways, I really enjoyed the tory. (You could become an author =D)
person#2: yeah, and it was very nice and why got big not finish one. (4.5/5)
person#3: soooooooo PERFECT!! ^_^ (y) emmm... Not finish?? 10x perfectt! Wth?
person#4: Anyway I like your story! (y) good job!?
person#5: Yes
person#6: Great ending, your great [drew something here]
person#7: I don't like the story that haven't completed. It's too bad [drew something here]
haha thanks for the drawings. ben conquered it all tho. x)
when my turn came to comments on others book...
heheheheh B) aku berpanat on Cynthia's comment paper and Wanchin's too. hahehohu.
on cynthia's comment paper, i wrote like,
"you put my story to shame", then,
"you put my vocabulary to shame",
"you put my adjectives to shame",
"you put my punctuations to shame".
AHAHAHHAAH! but its true! it was so good =.= macam, gila, shame banar eh.
then when mariam commented on her book, she just wrote an arrow to all my comments and said, "I agree."
HAHAHAH CALI!
Wanchin...well, i was bored seeing all "yes yes yes" on all the answer so i wrote,
"hello",
"bye bye",
"good afternoon",
"good night".
hahahahahaha XD HAHAHA
when we went to math class, they were like telling stories about how random all the comments were and cynthia even pointed about the comments i wrote (not knowing that i wrote it) kali mariam and aku ketawaa berabisan.
cynthia: *gasped* YOU WROTE IT? *pointed at mar*
mar: kron wrote the one with shame, i wrote i agree. hahaha!
hahahahah!
wanchin: my one also, got happy belated birthday, hello, bye bye.
mariam/kron: hahahahahahaha!
mariam: kron wrote hello and bye bye!
kron: aiii! hahah yeah i did=D
oh look. i just got reminded about one of my panat comments...
dan says:
pasal aku nda mentioned abt the grave robbers
just the girl sja
Fireworks says:
yeah
i read a lot about that
dan says:
really?
kau yg REVENGE ISN'T THE BEST THING, BUT OK.
and the one yg buat good night
and stuff??
AHAHAHAH!!
panat
Fireworks says:
haha
EHHH
cemana ko figured out aku buat revenge isnt the best thing?!
I DIDNT TELL YOU ANYTHING
dan says:
duh~
Fireworks says:
ai blog blog eh
ggahaha.
dan says:
your pen is black
so do arh si wan chin
ahaha!!
BUSTED KRON!
Fireworks says:
ERR DAMN
hahaha i dont get it though!! napa semua orang blue pen!!!!
hairaannnnnnn ku
chatting with danial is so educational. heh.
we were doing maths classwork when miss tan took a broom and started to sweep an area of the classroom furiously.
misstan: next time remind me to ask the little boy what class he's from.
everyone: huh?
kron: ohh. do you mean little BOY or little BOYS?
(cause after every amath class earlier, there will be a class filled with little boys...and girls)
misstan: aiya, little boy, little monster whatever lah.
everyone: hahahahahahah! little monster!
misstan: they always make a mess after they use. sweet wrappers..*continued to sweep furiously*
ermmmmmmm ive linked all the necessary people! :D
oh oh oh oh & im happy to say that mariam is - shocking news :O -
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